The Hermit's Story

Yea so this story was boring. The fact that it was mostly description, while it was really good description, just kind of hurt it a little. I thought it was cool when they went under the ice and there was no water (if that happens in real life I definitely want to see it), and some of the stuff with the dogs was cool, but overall it was pretty boring. I found myself unconsciously skipping over sentences looking for the good stuff, but unfortunately not finding it. I dont really know what else to say. Good try though dude who wrote the Hermit's Story.